510 BJ对话的recap(慎入)(33楼又一感人更新)

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From: "Mark (emelwhy) " <mlytjc2@...>

Date: Sat May 28, 2005  9:05 am

Subject: 510 "I Love You" scene recap

> 510 "I Love You" recap
>
> OK...have your Kleenex and hankies close at hand.
>
> Liberty Avenue...night or early hours of the morning, post-bombing
>
> The street has a sickly reddish-orange glow from the lights of all
> the emergency vehicles.
>
> what seems to be a mist may be the aftermath of smoke from the
> bombing and probably a fire.
>
> Firemen in helmets and yellow coats, with oxygen tanks on their
> backs and black uniformed cops cross back and forth in the
> foreground. Survivors wrapped in blankets stand to the side.
>
> Down the middle of the street strides a very stern looking Brian
> Kinney.
>
> The whole opening seems to be in slight slow motion
>
> The scene is completely silent until Brian gets closer to the
> foreground and then we here the sound of radio calls from the
cops'
> walkie-talkies and from the emergency vehicles.
>
> Brian looks straight ahead..he sees something
>
> Cut to a dirty, tired and bedraggled Justin standing near some
cops.
>
> He has on a black Paramedic jacket with a badge, over his white
> button shirt. The shirt, once bright and stylish, is now covered
with
> dirt and grease and is un tucked from his pants His face is
smeared
> with smokey soot.
>
> He turns and sees Brian and heads toward him
>
> His mouth is partially open, teeth showing, but not smiling.
>
> Cut to Brian. His loping stride speeds up. He is looking directly
at
> Justin with an anxious expression as if he cannot get to him fast
> enough
>
> cut to Justin walking faster. He is tired and sad.
>
> The walk right into one another
>
> This is seen at first from Justin's back as he walks up to Brian.
>
> J: Is Michael gonna be okay?
>
> B: They don't know (and before the word know is out of his mouth
he
> has his arms wrapped around Justin and Justin reaches up to
embrace
> him at the same time)
>
> There is a white oval on the back of Justin's jacket with the
> words "Paramedic" appliqued on it
>
> Brian's left hand grabs the cloth of the jacket directly on the
> applique and scrunches the material together desperately trying to
> possess as much of Justin as he can
>
> Cut to Justin. The bottom half of his dirty face is buried in the
> shoulder of Brian's leather jacket.
>
> They hold each other tightly. You can hear them breathing heavily
>
> Finally they separate and we see them in a 3/4 shot, in profile,
with
> the reddish glow in the background and people moving about.
>
> B: (his voice is different. Unsteady. almost on the verge of
> breaking) When I heard... I called you on your cell... but you
didn't
> answer.
>
> Close up on Brian looking at Justin. Brian shows all his emotion
in
> his face. He is not hiding it.He wipes his mouth with the side of
his
> hand
>
> B: I was so f**kin...scared (his voice goes up a note on the
> word "scared". He smiles and tries to laugh, but he is close to
> tears.) All I could think was (huffs)...please (voice cracks
> on "please")don't let anything happen to him.
>
> Cut to Justin. He is silent. mouth partially open like he wants to
> say something but can't. His eyes are wet. His face seems almost
more
> beautiful in its smudged, dirty state. I thought immediately of
the
> title of the old film, "Angels With Dirty Faces"
>
> Brian moves closer again and embraces Justin.
>
> We see him push his face against the side of Justin's face and
puts
> his lips next to Justin's ear.
>
> He whispers It is quiet but there is no doubt that he said it
>
>
> B:I love you.
>
>
> Shot of Justin's face buried in Brian's shoulder. Recognition of
what
> Brian said is in his eyes. He starts to pull back to look Brian
> directly in the face.
>
> Justin is looking up at Brian, with his left hand on his shoulder.
A
> slight, but high pitched "oh" escapes from his lips. He squints.
>
> As they look at each other Brian says it again:
>
> B: (Firmly and with meaning)I...love you.
>
> Justin's face crumples and he begins to cry. He takes his hand
from
> Brian's shoulder and places it on Brian's cheek . He moves forward
> and up, pressing his mouth into Brian's.
>
> They kiss, pull back and kiss again. This time they stayed glued
> together
>
> Camera pulls back slightly and we see them wrapping their arms
around
> each other, almost desperately.
>
> Camera pull back for a long panoramic shot..a tableau
>
> Yellowish lights in the background, the front of a cop car and a
> battery of spotlights to the left, the back of an ambulance to the
> right.
>
> Cops and Firemen moving back in forth in the front and in the
> background
>
> and in the middle are Brian and Justin frozen in an embrace and a
> kiss, Justin standing on elevated toes to reach up to Brian.



不知道这样贴出来妥当不,如果不妥请斑竹删去!
刚刚看到,太感人了!

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刚看到楼主就贴过来了 亲!!
这个版本是我看到的第三个版本了 不过私以为这个版本写的最感人
今天还看到J说I DO的那个了 我鸡皮疙瘩都起来了 期待啊

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lurentt,我要亲你才对呢!用的是你提供的帐号去看的~~
还有一个Brian说Justin beautiful的不知道真不真实我没贴过来,不过同样看到感动死了!!

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我在BrianandJustinspoiler Group的时候就觉得Mark适合写小说,他/她怎么能把人的行为描述的这么仔细呢,太厉害了。

另外楼主你的那个题目太泄露剧情,我帮你改了一下,请别介意。
Time To Say Goodbye.

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Re:510 "I Love You" recap(慎入)

下面是引用mirror于2005-05-28 13:21发表的:
lurentt,我要亲你才对呢!用的是你提供的帐号去看的~~
还有一个Brian说Justin beautiful的不知道真不真实我没贴过来,不过同样看到感动死了!!
彻底傻眼中 会不真实吗?我已经偷着乐好久了 这半小时下巴都脱臼了= =~~~~~~~~
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Re:Re:510 "I Love You" recap(慎入)

下面是引用lurentt于2005-05-28 13:23发表的Re:510 "I Love You" recap(慎入):

彻底傻眼中 会不真实吗?我已经偷着乐好久了 这半小时下巴都脱臼了= =~~~~~~~~
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太幸福不敢相信啊!!s5真赚死我们的眼泪了~~

ps:谢谢斑竹修改!

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我只希望是真的...........

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简直太感人了。。。。我边看边拼命睁大眼睛。。。简直不相信阿。。。哇哈哈 !!!!!!!!!!!

小J终于“守得云开见月明“拉~~~
人只要能保护对自己来说重要的东西,那就够了.....ps:我爱那只小乌龟~~~

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真希望这就是结尾。现在明白了真想在此刻死去是什么意思了。

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Brian还说了两次ILY。。
5555。。。
感动ing.. [s:203]

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稀里糊涂看明白了....俺越来越郁闷,英文太臭!

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感动!真想赶快看到.B能说出来真是不容易呀,呵呵.

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感动,也很符合我的想象,不考虑513的话这里真是幸福啊

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天~~~~~啊~~~~!!我要哭了~~~~~~好想看到Brian求婚然后小J说“I do.”有得看么?

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下面是引用leslielala于2005-05-28 20:04发表的:
天~~~~~啊~~~~!!我要哭了~~~~~~好想看到Brian求婚然后小J说“I do.”有得看么?
回亲亲 求婚的剧情我挖地三尺从来没看到过详细版
但是 今天同样在那个版上看到他们俩在镜子面前试装(结婚礼服)时 J说了I DO 我的下巴就是为了这个笑脱掉的
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下面是引用leslielala于2005-05-28 20:04发表的:
天~~~~~啊~~~~!!我要哭了~~~~~~好想看到Brian求婚然后小J说“I do.”有得看么?
再"以后同用我的姓" [s:204]
爱人不容易

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這是有510對話和之前結婚試裝的場景描述
來源:http://groups.yahoo.com/group/QA ... ilers/message/63095

As for the bombing scene..okay here are the details...
Brian is on his way to the airport, he is taking a trip to Australia to
celebrate that he is cancer-free now. While on the way, he hears
that Babylon has been bombed on the radio...and he starts
calling Justin's cell phone over and over and tells the driver to
turn around and get there to Babylon ASAP...when they arrive, it is
utter mayhem.
Jen and her hot boyfriend, Tucker, are outside, and he runs up to
her immediately and asks "Where is Justin?"...she is very upset
and says, "He is still inside, please Brian find him."
Brian becomes very Rage-like and starts pushing everyone out
of his way, even though the fireman are telling everyone they
need to get out, he ignores them and is frantic looking for Justin.
He sees him and runs over to him and pulls him out. Only then
does he look for Michael, and he goes to the hospital with Deb
and Ben to check on Mikey. He is very upset at the hospital
because Michael needs a blood transfusion and the doctor
indicates that he can't take a gay person's blood, since it is too
high risk...Brian is in tears and goes after him screaming, "Take
my blood"....However, they don't and Ben calms Brian down.
when things calm down at the hospital and Michael is taking in
for surgery..Brian returns to the bomb scene and looks for Justin,
who he finds outside. He runs up to him and Tells him how
scared he was that something had happened to him, he said he
kept trying to call his cellphone, but got no answer and then they
hug and Brian whispers in Justin's ear, "I love you"....Justin is
literally crying and speechless and Brian then pulls back and
looks Justin right in the eyes and repeats it, "I love you"...they
kiss passionately...end of episode....hope that answers your
questions.

As for when Brian tells Justin he is beautiful...the details are
Brian and Justin have their suits on for the wedding, they are
being fitted...and at first Brian is just in the room and then Justin
walks in and Brian can't stop staring at him, Justin gets all
insecure, and asks if he looks bad. Brian stares in his eyes and
says "No, you look beautiful"..they then walk over to the mirror
together and Brian stands behind Justin in the mirror and has
his arms around him, and Brian says something, which I believe
was "Its not a question, it is a declaration." Brian also jokes and
says that Justin better be more emphatic when the minister asks
him if he does"...Justin stares in Brian's eyes and says, "I
do"..they kiss..end of scene.
I am pretty sure I have the dialog right, but if will rewatch and
double check...but I am almost positive I do.

Hope this helps, love..gina (kintay)

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我把兩段加起來翻譯了,有些意思不好抓,沒辦法照字直譯,我是找相似的意義去翻的,還請多包涵。

: As for the bombing scene..okay here are the details...
:
: Brian is on his way to the airport, he is taking a trip to Australia to
: celebrate that he is cancer-free now. While on the way, he hears
: that Babylon has been bombed on the radio...and he starts
: calling Justin's cell phone over and over and tells the driver to
: turn around and get there to Babylon ASAP...when they arrive, it is
: utter mayhem.

Brian正準備前往機場,他打算去澳洲渡假,好好慶祝一番(癌症治癒)。
在他前往機場的路上,從車上廣播聽到巴比倫爆炸的消息,
Brian震驚地不斷打手機給Justin,但卻沒有任何回應,
他馬上叫司機掉頭並盡可能的趕到巴比倫。
當他到達時,看到整個巴比倫簡直陷入一團混亂


: Jen and her hot boyfriend, Tucker, are outside, and he runs up to
: her immediately and asks "Where is Justin?"...she is very upset
: and says, "He is still inside, please Brian find him."

Jen和他的新男友Tucker站在巴比倫外的街道上,Brian立即跑向他們並問
「Justin在哪?你有沒有看到他?」

Jen看起來非常沮喪,並說
「Justin還在裡面,Brian拜託,請你一定要找到他」

:
: Brian becomes very Rage-like and starts pushing everyone out
: of his way, even though the fireman are telling everyone they
: need to get out, he ignores them and is frantic looking for Justin.

Brian聽到後變得非常的Rage(註:原po的形容真是可愛啊),他開始推開所有擋在
他前面的人,即便消防員不斷告訴大家趕快離開現場,Brian仍然繼續往裡衝,並
發狂似的尋找Justin

:
: He sees him and runs over to him and pulls him out. Only then
: does he look for Michael, and he goes to the hospital with Deb
: and Ben to check on Mikey. He is very upset at the hospital
: because Michael needs a blood transfusion and the doctor
: indicates that he can't take a gay person's blood, since it is too
: high risk...Brian is in tears and goes after him screaming, "Take
: my blood"....However, they don't and Ben calms Brian down.

Brian總算看到Justin,他急忙的跑向他,把Justin拉到外面,接著他開始尋找Michael
(註:爆炸案中Michael受傷滿嚴重的,被送往醫院),然後和Deb和Ben一起前往醫院。

Brian在醫院裡非常的沮喪,因為Michael的手術需要捐血(註:印象當時沒有人和Michael
同血型,所以非常情況危急,因Michael急需手術,但Brian是O型可以幫上忙),當時Brian
整個人又慌又急,眼中甚至有淚水,大喊「用我的血,把我的血給Michael」

但醫生因Brian是Gay,有愛滋高危險性而拒絕他。Brian幾乎冷靜不下來,但Ben勸Brian
冷靜

(註:Brian你也有今天啊,終於知道同一天失去兩人的話會有多痛苦了吧,BM迷
    應該很愛這段吧)


: when things calm down at the hospital and Michael is taking in
: for surgery..Brian returns to the bomb scene and looks for Justin,
: who he finds outside.

:J: Is Michael gonna be okay?

:B: They don't know (and before the word know is out of his mouth
    he has his arms wrapped around Justin and Justin reaches up to
    embrace him at the same time)

當Michael的手術順利進行後,冷靜下來的Brian回到巴比倫爆炸現場找Justin,
他跑向站在外面街道上的Justin

J:Michael還好嗎,他沒事吧。

B:現在還不確定(在Brian開口回答前,他就用整個手臂環抱住Justin,而Justin也回抱
  住Brian)


:Brian's left hand grabs the cloth of the jacket directly on the
:applique and scrunches the material together desperately trying to
:possess as much of Justin as he can

Brian的右手緊緊的抓住Justin的外套,好像用盡一切可能都不願放開Justin

:Cut to Justin. The bottom half of his dirty face is buried in the
:shoulder of Brian's leather jacket.

鏡頭切回Justin,他有一半的臉都埋到Brian的肩膀上

:They hold each other tightly. You can hear them breathing heavily

他們倆緊緊的相擁,你幾乎可以聽到他們彼此沉重的呼吸聲。

:Finally they separate and we see them in a 3/4 shot, in profile, with
:the reddish glow in the background and people moving about.

最後他們放開彼此,互相凝視著對方,這段凝視佔滿了四分之三的畫面,此時整個背景
顏色溢滿一片醺紅,人們來來去去。
(註:原po描述場景的功力實在是一流,太佩服了)

:B: (his voice is different. Unsteady. almost on the verge of
:breaking) When I heard... I called you on your cell... but you didn't
:answer.

B:(他的聲音有些不一樣,有點不穩,幾乎是顫抖著)當我聽到這一切....當我不斷地
  打你的手機....但....卻得不到任何回應.....

:Close up on Brian looking at Justin. Brian shows all his emotion in
:his face. He is not hiding it.He wipes his mouth with the side of his
:hand

鏡頭切近,Brian看著Justin,他所有的情緒全都顯現在臉上,再也藏不了,他也
不想再藏了。

:B: I was so f**kin...scared (his voice goes up a note on the
:word "scared". He smiles and tries to laugh, but he is close to
:tears.) All I could think was (huffs)...please (voice cracks
:on "please")don't let anything happen to him.

B:我..幾乎...被你嚇死了(當Brian說scared時,他微笑著並試圖笑出來,但卻是
  幾乎接近快哭出來)當時我所能想到的就是(恐懼著)...天啊..拜託千萬不要讓他發
  生任何事(Brian說please時,語氣有種瀕臨瘋狂邊緣的感覺)

:Cut to Justin. He is silent. mouth partially open like he wants to
:say something but can't. His eyes are wet. His face seems almost more
:beautiful in its smudged, dirty state. I thought immediately of the
:title of the old film, "Angels With Dirty Faces"

鏡頭切回Justin,他安靜著,他試圖說些什麼但卻說不出來,他的眼框整個濕了,
他的臉被煙霧薰髒,但卻有種不可思議的美。
(註:原po想到一部電影的名字Angels With Dirty Faces天使染塵
來形容Justin的樣子)

:Brian moves closer again and embraces Justin.
:We see him push his face against the side of Justin's face and puts
:his lips next to Justin's ear.
:He whispers It is quiet but there is no doubt that he said it

:B:I love you.

Brian更貼近Justin並再次緊抱他,他把臉貼向Justin,並靠近Justin的耳朵,輕聲的說
雖然聲音不大,但他真的說了,毫無疑問的,Brian真的說了。

B:我愛你


:Shot of Justin's face buried in Brian's shoulder. Recognition of what
:Brian said is in his eyes. He starts to pull back to look Brian
:directly in the face.

鏡頭切回還埋在Brian肩膀上的Justin,從他的眼中我們知道Justin聽到了,也瞭解到
Brian說了什麼,Justin抬起頭直視著Brian
(註:天啊,到這邊我就快激動到昏了)

:Justin is looking up at Brian, with his left hand on his shoulder. A
:slight, but high pitched "oh" escapes from his lips. He squints.

Justin看著Brian,手放在Brian肩膀上,輕輕地並有點激動的「oh」了一聲,他的眼神
迷濛起來

(註:對不起這段好難翻,翻不出那種感覺來,我猜那句「oh」應該是近似於216裡Justin
以為Brian偷偷幫他準備生日禮物那時的那聲「oh」,但再低調一些)

:As they look at each other Brian says it again:

他們凝視著彼此,而Brian又再說了一遍

:B: (Firmly and with meaning)I...love you.

B:(堅定且充滿情意的)我...愛你。

:Justin's face crumples and he begins to cry. He takes his hand from
:Brian's shoulder and places it on Brian's cheek . He moves forward
:and up, pressing his mouth into Brian's.

Justin哭了出來,他把手放在Brian的臀上,貼近Brian並輕墊起腳,吻住Brian
(註:好美的畫面,真的好美)

:They kiss, pull back and kiss again. This time they stayed glued
:together

他們親吻一遍又一遍,在這一刻,他們似乎再也分不開了。

:Camera pulls back slightly and we see them wrapping their arms around
:each other, almost desperately.

鏡頭輕輕的拉遠,他們倆幾乎像是不顧一切的抱住彼此。

這部分結束


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接下來這段比較短,描述的比較少

: Brian and Justin have their suits on for the wedding, they are
: being fitted...and at first Brian is just in the room and then Justin
: walks in and Brian can't stop staring at him

Brian和Justin正在為婚禮試裝,他們看起來都非常的帥。當時Brian在房間裡,
而當Justin走進來時,Brian幾乎沒辦法不盯著Justin看。

  Justin gets all insecure, and asks if he looks bad. Brian stares in his
eyes and
: says "No, you look beautiful"..they then walk over to the mirror
: together and Brian stands behind Justin in the mirror and has
: his arms around him, and Brian says something, which I believe
: was "Its not a question, it is a declaration." Brian also jokes and
: says that Justin better be more emphatic when the minister asks
: him if he does"...Justin stares in Brian's eyes and says, "I
: do"..they kiss..end of scene.

Justin有些緊張的問是不是看起來很糟,Brian凝視著Justin的眼睛並說
「一點也不,你看起來好美」

然後他們走到鏡子前,Brian站在Justin後面並環抱著Justin,並說
「我想毫無疑問的,這就是個愛的誓言了」

Brian還開玩笑地說
「當牧師問你是否願意時,你最好要給我說得非常堅定喔」

Justin凝視著Brian的眼睛並說
「我當然願意」

然後他們接吻,鏡頭結束

這一大段缺少精準的對話
主要是靠原po描述
所以對話部分或許沒有完全對
到時可能會有不一樣
但大概是這樣的感覺

氣氛上因為Brian有點開玩笑語氣
所以我想這段應該是很俏皮可愛的


各位不喜歡結局的同胞們
基本上就把這段當作結局吧
真是讓人開心到不行

翻完了
大家多多包涵
有錯請指正
我會再修改的

先出去買個晚餐
翻的好累
希望大家喜歡

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太美妙了~~~我已经无法用言语形容~~

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LUCKY,今天看到的东东真是太好了,一扫昨天的阴霾啊

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B: I was so f**kin...scared (his voice goes up a note on the
> word "scared". He smiles and tries to laugh, but he is close to
> tears.) All I could think was (huffs)...please (voice cracks
> on "please")don't let anything happen to him.


He whispers It is quiet but there is no doubt that he said it
>
>
> B:I love you.

> As they look at each other Brian says it again:
>
> B: (Firmly and with meaning)I...love you.

这个三个地方简直是一步一步把我弄得洪水泛滥的!!!!
真不敢相信他们在经历了这些后还能分离??!!

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婚礼前试衣服的那段好温馨好温馨好温馨!!!!!!
Brian是温柔的丈夫,小J是羞涩的新娘!!

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下面是引用贵之水于2005-05-28 22:14发表的:
B: I was so f**kin...scared (his voice goes up a note on the
> word "scared". He smiles and tries to laugh, but he is close to
> tears.) All I could think was (huffs)...please (voice cracks
> on "please")don't let anything happen to him.

.......


知道CL的可怕了吧
先给你点甜头
再毫不留情的在你心里刺一刀
一个字"狠"

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樓上的說得對,第五季真的是溫水煮青蛙,慢慢的一步一步讓你痛不欲生,慢慢折磨,先苦再甜,最後再來個大虐殺,有誰狠得過CL的。

婚前試裝應該是發生在511吧,現在我正等著看512-513,CL打算怎麼折磨我們,劇情要怎樣轉到痛苦的那段。

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