本帖最后由 joycechen1985 于 2009-8-26 22:14 编辑

hello Daddy

scene:criminal scene investigation lab    9:52  A.M.
           Mac's office

Mac(拥抱了一下突然到访的侄子):a rough time,ha?
Justin(笑着,回抱Mac):absolutely.
Mac(关心地询问):how is Brian?
Justin(老实地回答):better...he should be at home now if there is not a traffic jam.
Mac(点头笑着):oh,it's very soon.
Justin(开玩笑):his recovering ability is even better than an animal's .so——don't worry about him.
Mac(不置可否地笑着摇摇头):um...that's fine...give him my greeting,ok?
Justin(俏皮地应着):aha~I will.
Justin似乎还有什么要讲,一直犹豫着没有开口,Mac觉察到,一时也沉默着等待对方接下来的话......
Justin(抿抿嘴,像是打定主意似的,认真看着并有点激动地一把抱住Mac):...it was awful...thanks Mac,thank you so much... for saving Brian.
Mac(鼓励地拍拍侄子的后背,坚定有力地):I know,kid...everything has been gone...don't be scared any more... come on and go home,Brian is waiting for you.
Justin(稳了稳情绪,突然笑得有点神秘):actually...I can't go home now...I'll also pick up some friends.
......
scene:Justin's apartment   12:09 P.M.

原本熟睡中的Brian终于是被馋虫叫醒,饥肠辘辘地看了看墙上的复古挂钟,再撇撇仍旧没有动静的大门。本想叫个中国菜外卖,忽然想起David临走时候的话(David:Justin let me told you,he is coming back soon.)还是放下了已经拿起的电话,有些迟缓地走到床边拿起笔记本电脑打发时间。

Brian(一边浏览“hot guy”主页观看劲爆视频,一边自言自语地抱怨):poor old man~you have been abandoned by your heartless little husband...god!  I can't believe my sunshine is having more important things except me.
...
half an hour later...

随着一声沉重地开门声,Justin拎着一个小小行李箱走进来。Brian已经饿到无力地歪在床上。

Brian(故意装可怜地):hoho~my damn heartless little husband is coming back~~~let me have a look...(不可思议地怪叫起来)did you go to a journey...when...when I was still in hospital?!
Justin(不疾不徐地把行李箱放到门侧,打趣地应付着孩子气的Brian):honey,please shut your big mouth up,if you shouldn't want to be laughed at by our friends... and...your son. (回过头,热情地招呼外面的人)come on and in,Ladies...certainly our little price and princess.

Linsay领着已经五岁的儿子Melanie抱着J.R.,出现在门口。Brian瞬间张大嘴,定格在原地,不可思议地眨了眨大眼。Linsay看到Brian的样子,坏笑着在儿子耳边说了什么。

Gus(这个“Brian二世”眨巴着相同的大眼睛,调皮地吐吐舌头,背着小手慢慢走向Brian,甜甜地):hello Daddy.
Brian(被这一句话重新激活,夹带着他怎么都不会坦白承认的惊喜):Oh my god.


TO BE CONTINUED...
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  • cora

life is a journey.
sometimes up,sometimes down.
keep moving on,my friends.

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Lindsay和Mel怎么带着孩子们出现了{:3_240:}

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本帖最后由 joycechen1985 于 2009-8-25 21:31 编辑

52# cora
看了后面的就把前面的情节忘了,呵呵,回顾一下21#后半部分吧{:3_152:}
scene:Justin's apartment

          the telephone had rang for a while.

telephone answering machine(Lindsay's voice):surprise!you are a happy new couple!haha~(Melanie's laughing)Ok,I must calm down(laughing) Melanie handled a case and got a big commission...we decide to take a vacation to N.Y.  (兴奋地大叫)certainly Gus and J.R.must be with their mothers.so——see you later—— in N.Y. boys!haha~(Melanie's voice:don't too work hard Brian!)(laughing out loud)...
life is a journey.
sometimes up,sometimes down.
keep moving on,my friends.

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那他们带着孩子出现是要干嘛呢{:3_240:}

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nice

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等着little husband回来给弄饭菜的Brian
好象很家庭的样子
大丈夫耍小孩子脾气
很好玩的

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Brian is so cute! Waiting for his little heartless husband~ hmm~ to feed him,just like a little baby~:s12

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不错

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TAT。。。这中英文混用看得我很懵。。。

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最近有个很重要的考试要准备,所以没空更新文章,呜~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~大家一定等我啊,11月我考完试一定继续写下去~~~暂时过来告别一下
life is a journey.
sometimes up,sometimes down.
keep moving on,my friends.

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美 剧没看过几部啊!!

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60# joycechen1985
没关系
偶蹲在这儿等着
祝joyce考出好成绩

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本帖最后由 joycechen1985 于 2009-11-18 09:43 编辑

Merry Christmas,my babies

scene:near the French windows of Justin's apartment     Dec. 24    22:55 p.m.

           Justin sat at the ground with two suger bars----Gus and J.R.
           While he was reading a story book to them,the auto cafe machine was working.
           the telephone rang suddenly,Justin picked it up.

the telephone(Brian's voice,刻意压抑着兴奋):hey honey,merry christmas!
Justin(好笑地佯装埋怨):thanks for your long distance greeting,Mr. Kinney.
                                                   how is your business in China?
the telephone(自负地): oh my artist, I am Brian Kinney,remember it?
Justin(温柔地笑着,无奈地耸耸肩,看向在落地窗边玩耍着的孩子们):yeah~but i'm afraid our childern prefer to be with their Daddy rather than be like this.
the telephone(停顿了一秒,话锋一转):——Justin
Justin(突然听到Brian很正经的喊出自己的名字,有点奇怪):yes?
the telephone(Brian突然心情大好地):what's your christmas's wish? ...come on ,tell me.
Justin(认真地想了想):even if it is impossible to come true?
the telephone(Brian在电话那头瘪瘪嘴,嘴角露出一丝阴谋即将得逞的笑意):whatever...maybe I can make it real,right?
Justin对于Brian的臭屁已经习以为常,有时候他不得不承认自己的伴侣是个奇迹制造者。
当2个月前那场可怕的绑架事件渐渐被人淡忘的时候,每每Justin怀揣些许不安旁观着Brian四处奔波,为Kinnetic开疆辟土,总是会对眼前这个男人产生更加强烈的爱恋,与此同时“想追随他的脚步,不断前行”的信念也越发坚定。
Gus(清脆的童音,兴奋地):snowing!
Justin扭过头,从落地窗看出去,片片雪白纷纷扬扬地洒落,此刻,咖啡机里也“咕咕”地逸出浓郁醇厚的咖啡味,飘散在屋子的每个角落。
Justin(振奋了一下,让刚刚感触的心情一扫而空,露出他那代表性的阳光般灿烂的笑容,真诚地):...I want to be with you in every christmas...Brian...I love you.
电话里传来Brian低沉地笑声,夹杂着一阵巨大的“嗡嗡”的噪音。
the telephone(伴随着螺旋桨转动地噪音,Brian轻声回应着):me too,sunshine
Justin(听不清楚Brian的声音):what did you say,Brian?...I can't hear you...It's too noisy...where are you?
Gus(突然从地板上跳起来,兴奋地拍手大叫):Daddy!
Justin一脸狐疑地拿着电话走到窗户前,只见一架小型直升飞机伴随着轻盈的雪花从天而降,在他的窗前盘旋。直升机横过机身,后排座舱门被缓缓打开,一个身着Armani纯黑大衣,Gucci限量版羊皮手工手套的熟悉身影手里拿着电话,赫然眼前。被螺旋桨的巨大旋风吹得凌乱不堪的头发,丝毫没有减弱他的魅力。
Justin(难以置信地隔着窗户呆呆看着Brian):oh my god...
Brian(坐在直升机后座,有点孩子气地大笑着,张开手臂,逗弄地对着一窗之隔的爱人眨巴眼睛,大声喊):suprise!  merry christmas! ...my babies,Daddy is back!

TO BE CONTINUE...
PS:hello~好久不见了各位!Joyce又回来喽~{:3_157:}
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  • cora

life is a journey.
sometimes up,sometimes down.
keep moving on,my friends.

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Joyce回来喇{:3_233:}

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看的我这一个晕呀

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英语我永远的痛:s09

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好棒的禮物~~~我也要這個願望。

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加油!辛苦!!!!!!

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很棒,只是有些单词不懂意思,唉。。回头打印出来慢慢查。。

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不太習慣這種形式的文
但還蠻特別的

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