[短篇] [翻译BJ] B爸爸父亲节快乐! Say My Name by Keira(威望30)*已附说明*

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[ 本帖最后由 cora 于 2006-11-28 13:08 编辑 ]
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为什么前面那段我米看懂啊!~~~
到底是谁亲了谁啊~~
我是笨蛋~~默~~
= =、、、
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我的威望剛好可以看到~~好險~~
吃醋的B最可愛了~~~
這裡的小J好sexy,喜歡~~~~
我的Blog~~ http://blog.yam.com/toriko/

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好香艳地两只……幸福……

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呃,第一段到底是谁亲了谁?偶大白,没看懂啊~~~~

接下来就好hot呀,偶心跳加快鸟~~~~
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HOT HOT HOT和这两天的天气一样HOT!谢谢辛苦翻译!

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下面是引用lee81311于2005-08-08 01:18发表的:
呃,第一段到底是谁亲了谁?偶大白,没看懂啊~~~~

接下来就好hot呀,偶心跳加快鸟~~~~


原来有人和我一样没看懂
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下面是引用lee81311于2005-08-08 01:18发表的:
呃,第一段到底是谁亲了谁?偶大白,没看懂啊~~~~

接下来就好hot呀,偶心跳加快鸟~~~~

同问~~~~~~~~

文章题目让我想到了Destiny's Child的这首歌Say My Name



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也许是翻译的时候有点混乱吧我猜
反正我也没看懂

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“Brian抓住Justin的上衣,使劲把他拉上来,狠狠吻住他.”
当他把Michael推回长椅,Justin也从容回到位子上,周围都发出喝采,Brian只是拱起眉头作为响应.

原文是:Emmett whoops with glee and Justin smiles at Brian coyly as he crosses over to where Michael sits. He grabs his shirt, yanks him up, and kisses him hard. There is a round of applause when he pushes Michael back down onto the couch, and Justin saunters back to his seat. Brian simply arches his eyebrow in response.

这里第二句的主语应该是justin才对 所以是J吻M吧???

“等等.Michael应该要亲Justin,没有理由,”Ted提及游戏结果.”

原文是:“Wait, Michael was supposed to kiss Justin, not the other way around,” Ted notes.

意思是不是应该是:等等,应该是M主动去亲J吧~不是反过来(J亲M)

,但Ted的注意力很快就转移到一个裸舞的”小妞”身上

原文是:but soon Ted is being forced to strip naked and dance like a chicken.

好像应该是:但是TED很快就被迫跳脱衣舞了(哈哈 ted应该是输了)

“可惜他的脑筋被大量涌上的杂七杂八说服成运转困难”

原文:but his brain is too fuzzy to come up with anything convincing

可是他的脑子里乱七八糟的(喝酒喝多了吧~),想不出一个有说服力的理由

说的8对LZ敲轻点哦~~~后面粉好看 hot!!!

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汗,第一段我也看不懂

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虽然细节方面有点儿没搞清楚,还是感谢lz的辛勤劳动!!!有够hot,哈哈哈!!!!
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呵呵~~又一篇好看(HOT)的文文!!支持支持!

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提到了父亲节,和故事本身无关吧,是不是原作者在父亲节的时候写的?

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亲爱地Dr.F,我爱hot~~~哦呵呵~~
不过前面地部分,素kaoro亲爱地说地那样捏。
罚Dr.F找一篇更hot地翻译~~
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Fortunately,the lad's genius.

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下面是引用kaoro于2005-08-08 09:04发表的:
“Brian抓住Justin的上衣,使劲把他拉上来,狠狠吻住他.”
当他把Michael推回长椅,Justin也从容回到位子上,周围都发出喝采,Brian只是拱起眉头作为响应.

原文是:Emmett whoops with glee and Justin smiles at Brian coyly as he crosses over to where Michael sits. He grabs his shirt, yanks him up, and kisses him hard. There is a round of applause when he pushes Michael back down onto the couch, and Justin saunters back to his seat. Brian simply arches his eyebrow in response.

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原来如此~~~
明白了
哇~好多钱~~*^^* [img]http://fs1.cyworld.com.cn/data2/2005/07/06/034/1120635034530735_file.GIF[/img]

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还不够啊,继续努力

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下面是引用kaoro于2005-08-08 09:04发表的:
“Brian抓住Justin的上衣,使劲把他拉上来,狠狠吻住他.”
当他把Michael推回长椅,Justin也从容回到位子上,周围都发出喝采,Brian只是拱起眉头作为响应.

原文是:Emmett whoops with glee and Justin smiles at Brian coyly as he crosses over to where Michael sits. He grabs his shirt, yanks him up, and kisses him hard. There is a round of applause when he pushes Michael back down onto the couch, and Justin saunters back to his seat. Brian simply arches his eyebrow in response.

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纠正的不错~楼主可以适当的纠正下~~~

两位都辛苦了~~

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好幸福的人!

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嘻嘻~~谢谢几位的支持~偶刚开始还担心自己是不是理解错的说~

TO 亲爱的DR.F:
Justin smiles at Brian coyly as he crosses over to where Michael sits.
根据主语一致原则,这里he应该是指J, as前后是几乎同一时间发生的事情
后面一句HE做主语也就指的是J了 呵呵~~~

偶说TED输了 意思是他在后面一轮可能输了~然后被人要求跳脱衣舞~~~哈哈哈

支持SUNNYjj的提议~~再翻一些更HOT的文文吧

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发几贴才到30啊?

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啊~~28点了

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